Do you think these names suit? hey im writing a story ! woo hoo... another one... i know ^^
so i have this thing... i dont know if the names suit. tell me what you think alright ^^ ?
Charlotte(Charlie) and Lizzie (twins) - twincest relationship.
Eric and Jake - gay relationship (both homosexual).
Aundrei(Rei) (girl) and Antony(Ant) - straight relationship.
Clare and Rachell - lesbian relationship (clare is homosexual and Rachell is bisexual).
ages;
Clare and Aundrei - 14
twins and Rachell - 15
Eric and Ant - 16
Jake - 17
Eric and Clare are siblings, they also have a baby brother named Caiden
Jake is the twins' older brother.
All the characters go to the same school (except Jake, he goes collage) and theyre all good friends.
the story is all about bulling because of your sexuality and appereance. The guys really like being outsiders and they love to stand out.
please tell me if youd be interested in reading something like this... if yess, heres the link where you can find the first ''chapter'' of the story [ emii-xxx.deviantart.com/gallery/27515498 ]
btw the story is called Another Kind.
PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK ^^
thanks :)
I think this sounds like an interesting story :)
Let me give you my opinion on your names. (Im going to rate them too)
Charlie and Lizzie- Good. 9/10 They go together well, especially if Lizzie's real name is Elizabeth.
Eric and Jake- Nice. 8/10. they just sound like regular guy names.
Rei- I don't think this sounds right. 3/10. It just sounds... I don't know.. Off.
Ant- I'm not a fan of this, either. 1/10. What self respecting guy would LET himself be called Ant? Tony would be a very acceptable name for him.
Clare- I love this name. 9/10. It's great, and it goes great with Rachell.
Rachell- Decent. 6/10. I've never been a fan of the name itself, but it seems to fit your character.
You probably wont listen to me on the Rei/ Ant thing. But think about that. Say Rei and Ant over and over in your head. It just doesn't sound right, does it?
I might give your story a look :) After I go take a test that I've been putting off.. O.o
Good luck with your story! If you need any more help, just edit and I'll respond.